Macbeth Act 2 scene 2
The main characters in this scene are Lady Macbeth and Macbeth, this scene takes place in King Duncan’s castle. In this scene, Macbeth has already done the deed and he said the following. “Will all great Neptune’s ocean wash this blood clean from my hands? no this my hand will rather multitudinous seas incarnadine Making the green one red”.
The following paragraph will now be rewritten in present day and in my own words.
One day me and Alex my friend stayed at cricket even though Amy my girlfriend had a meeting with Alex, but Alex ignored her. Amy was angry, so Amy said to me “Nathan please kill Alex for my love”
Straight after cricket I stabbed him and hid him in the bushes, after that I put my bloody hands in the Thames and the water went from green to red. ” will this blood ever wash off”, I said.
Every time I walk past the Thames. It makes me think of how it should have never happened and I feel guilty every day.
July 17, 2016 at 8:58 pm
Great start here Nathan.
As you finish the rest of the scene:
1) Think about how you can manipulate the language from the scene in order to put across your take on it.
2) Feel free to add more stage directions and descriptions about what the stage might look like.
July 19, 2016 at 9:41 am
Make sure that you respond to the above feedback Nathan if you want to achieve the script writing badge.
July 19, 2016 at 9:42 am
Try and keep a tighter focus on the events from the scene also…