/shrike is a good character because he looks like a zombie and I like zombies
/this is demonstrated when he attacked him.
/the reader would then think that if he or she was young he must be scared.
I had a 189 but Devonte switched the computer of so that’s not my fault
and he still owes me but I cant do it again because that’s not fair on me so why do i have to do it.
but ill do it today and i might get to at lest 200 words or less or more but it is still not fair on me because i have to re right it because of some body else so yr ill still do it
so I think shrike is a good character because he looks horrible and that’s what I don’t like about him and I like him because he looks like a zombie and I like zombies because on black ops 1 2 and 3 or call of duty or would at war or what ever has zombies and you survive killing zombies so that’s why I like him why also I don’t like him is because he looks like a homeless person or a hobo and how is he still alive when hey dead that makes no sense and he has some torn of shoe and a rubbish hair cut and a rubbish hair line and a messed up face
ill do the rest another day or maybe ill do it tomorrow or sometime or when ever so see you later maybe ill do a bit more
but my mum doesn’t like this character because he looks like a zombie and my mum doesn’t like killing or likes zombies and yr she pretty much dos like anything to do with killing ERM blood or zombies war commando anything like that but she likes fake blood and scary things but I thing she’s weird or something.
my dad said he doesn’t like him because he looks creepy and scary but he doesn’t but the thing is I said to him you watch scary movies and you think this is scary I said to him that he should watch scary movie and saw and he didn’t want to listen to me so I put the movies on and he said there not scary but I said well how is he scary when saw and scary movie is not that’s just weird and he is a pitcher so that makes two of my family weird but that’s not the thirst time this has happened in primary as well but my aunt does the same thing as my dad so there’s three people that is weird and my aunt one day got a fake spider and scared me and my cousin when we were playing call of duty black ops two but the thing is we had the head phones to speak and to listen to the other players and we couldn’t hear my aunt so that jump scared us so we always check on the door so she doesn’t scare us when where playing call of duty eyer two or three or when there’s a four f one well play that and watch out for my aunt.
October 12, 2015 at 6:13 am
Good starting point Nathan but we need to focus more on the evidence from the text. Use quotes from the book to help your analysis.
November 11, 2015 at 10:16 am
That’s unfortunate Nathan but we still need to get up to a minimum of 500 words. Remember to use the helpsheet and quotes from the book.
November 11, 2015 at 10:21 am
You are learning how to analyse a character which will develop your vital reading skills. Until you complete it we can’t move on to the next part of our learning programme.